My before and After blog post!

 Today I was learning about how to edit and make a quality blog post.When we edited our not as good blog post we were try to make it as good as we could get it so we started writing.I was telling myself what could I do to make my blog post better so when you look at my drawing you will see what I improved.

I enjoyed editing my work and making it way more amazing then it was before and editing what didn't make sense.When I looked at my unfinished work I tried to see what I could improve so I did what I could do.

I found it challenging to find what was not a quality blog post.When I was making a poor quality to quality piece of writing I had to read though and make sure it made sense which I didn't think was too hard.

My digital learning object shows that I did a before and after piece of work.I worked hard to try finish it in time.

Next time I would add more writing and extend my sentences.

Giant Panda report

 Today I was learning about how to wright a report and to use paragraphs.We started on a giant panda report as a class then we moved on to sea creatures go look at that post .

My new learning was about how to do report writing the right way.We have been doing that for most of the week and were still doing it!

I enjoyed it because I really like animals and I loved to edit my work.When I do wright my Giant Panda report down on my chromebook I try to make sure that I have good interesting facts. 

I found it challenging to get all the keywords down and putting them into long sentences.I also found it hard to make sure that I have interesting enough fact to hook the readers into my work because everyone likes a little cool facts right .

My report on stingrays!

Today I was learning how to write a report and to use subheadings.

I enjoyed publishing and editing on my chromebook.

I found it challenging to find the good facts and information. 

My digital learning object shows that i've learning about Stingrays and that I can insert a doc into my blog.

Next time I would try to extend my sentences in my report.