Wednesday 26 August 2020

My before and After blog post!

 Today I was learning about how to edit and make a quality blog post.When we edited our not as good blog post we were try to make it as good as we could get it so we started writing.I was telling myself what could I do to make my blog post better so when you look at my drawing you will see what I improved.

I enjoyed editing my work and making it way more amazing then it was before and editing what didn't make sense.When I looked at my unfinished work I tried to see what I could improve so I did what I could do.

I found it challenging to find what was not a quality blog post.When I was making a poor quality to quality piece of writing I had to read though and make sure it made sense which I didn't think was too hard.

My digital learning object shows that I did a before and after piece of work.I worked hard to try finish it in time.

Next time I would add more writing and extend my sentences.

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