Thursday, 3 September 2020

My prayer space!

 This is my first prayer space I hope you guys like it because i've never made one before.

In the process of making the prayer space  I was collecting things around the house that I though represented god and the holy spirit If you are wondering why i'm making a prayer space i'm doing it for homework my teacher miss Steele made a challenge for us make a prayer space at home themed environment and post it on your blog so I did.when I got home I got to work so first I got a tablecloth then I got my big brothers candle, after I got a stag antler, an orange, a teddy of mine, a plant and a crystal. After I had got everything into place I lit the candle. There we are, I hope you like my prayer space!.


Filter feeding!

 
We were leaning about what shellfish pick up and what happends.So we stared a science project and what happened was when we put the clean water in it look like clean water then when we mixed it together it turned a peppermint green it was really cool.The thinks we needed was a funnel,instructions,funnel paper bekeis if you didn't know what bekeis they are like measuring cups.

I liked it when we had to choose if we should be allowed to eat shellfish and if you want to find out go look after you've read this.I found it hard to decide what I should choose with the should we be allowed to eat shellfish but still if you want to know go look and comment.

my persuasive writing

 today I was learning how to write persuasive writing so that when we write speeches we can use this why of writing.when we were writing in our books we had to add a title,a into.

Wednesday, 2 September 2020

Exploring blogs

 Today our class was learning about what can make your blog better and what will make people want to read all of your posts.Before we stared writing about what can make our blog better and what we want we look at three kids two from Matawi and one from St marys our school we look at there AMAZING blogs and we look at how many people from other countries have visited there blogs then we wrote it down on the slides.

When we started our learning cybersmart first we had to SMARF the slides then we went and looked at   what year they were what school they were from and something interesting about them.Then we moved on to the next slide and then we wrote about how many views they had and how many people from other countries had visited their blog.

After we did all that we came to the end we finished all the writing and had a look at there blog we made a new blog post used a catchy title and here we are comment down below and tell me what you think.

Wednesday, 26 August 2020

My before and After blog post!

 Today I was learning about how to edit and make a quality blog post.When we edited our not as good blog post we were try to make it as good as we could get it so we started writing.I was telling myself what could I do to make my blog post better so when you look at my drawing you will see what I improved.

I enjoyed editing my work and making it way more amazing then it was before and editing what didn't make sense.When I looked at my unfinished work I tried to see what I could improve so I did what I could do.

I found it challenging to find what was not a quality blog post.When I was making a poor quality to quality piece of writing I had to read though and make sure it made sense which I didn't think was too hard.

My digital learning object shows that I did a before and after piece of work.I worked hard to try finish it in time.

Next time I would add more writing and extend my sentences.

Wednesday, 12 August 2020

Giant Panda report

 Today I was learning about how to wright a report and to use paragraphs.We started on a giant panda report as a class then we moved on to sea creatures go look at that post .

My new learning was about how to do report writing the right way.We have been doing that for most of the week and were still doing it!

I enjoyed it because I really like animals and I loved to edit my work.When I do wright my Giant Panda report down on my chromebook I try to make sure that I have good interesting facts. 

I found it challenging to get all the keywords down and putting them into long sentences.I also found it hard to make sure that I have interesting enough fact to hook the readers into my work because everyone likes a little cool facts right .

Thursday, 6 August 2020

My report on stingrays!

Today I was learning how to write a report and to use subheadings.
I enjoyed publishing and editing on my chromebook.
I found it challenging to find the good facts and information. 
My digital learning object shows that i've learning about Stingrays and that I can insert a doc into my blog.
Next time I would try to extend my sentences in my report.